Free Choice Writing - Cat Girl and Dog Girl

   

Our class has been learning to write free choice writing on our chrome books. It took as two weeks to write it. We got to choose what we wanted to write about. Here is my story that I wrote.   

CAT GIRL AND DOG GIRL

Once upon a time there was a girl who was raised by big cats. Her name was Elizabeth. She had a friend called Zoe who loved dogs and was raised by dogs too. They did not live in a town or a city; they lived in the bush. They did not know how humans lived. They had a big cat and wild dog pride made up of lions, wolves, tigers, foxs, cheethers, wild dogs, leopards and jaguars and other types of cats and dogs.Their favorite pets were two cats called Charlie and Summer and one dog called Judith. 

One day while Elizabeth and Zoe were hunting for deer they found a little town called Greymouth it was close to the ocean. Elizabeth and Zoe started to explore the town. They sneaked around each corner. Then they found a hut (which was actually the SPCA). They looked through a see-through wall (window) and saw cats and dogs in a cage. They jumped into the see-through wall but they smashed into it banging their noses, “ouch”! They said. They also saw people inside! The people saw Elizabeth and Zoe. “These are strange animal-like creatures,” they said. They captured them and called the police. The police said we should take them to the zoo in Christchurch. They can be a new type of wild cat and dog for humans to see what wild people look like. The police were on the road to Christchurch with Elizabeth and Zoe trapped in the back. Elizabeth and Zoe struggled to get free, they wiggled and wiggled but they could not get out. 

While in the bush their mum’s were looking for them.  They roared and barked so loud that Elizabeth and Zoe heard it. They started to roar  and bark back to them too. Their mums heard their calls for help and came running after them. Elizabeth pushed her box that she was in and told Zoe to push her box so they both pushed their boxes so hard that the boxes fell out of the police truck and into the river beside the road, smashing the locks and opening the box doors. 

They struggled out and swam to the surface and onto dry land. Then their mums just arrived and licked them dry and said, “you little chipmunks do not do that again”.  That gave us a fright, we thought we might lose you two”. “Sorry mum” Elizabeth and Zoe said “we were just exploring and hunting”. 

On their way home to the bush they saw a kid who was sad and cold. Elizabeth nuzzled him and called mum over and said, “can we keep him please mum, he is all alone.” Mum said, “all right he can be a part of our pride”. Elizabeth said “wait we need to call him a name, right mum.” “Yeah,”said mum”. “Well maybe you and Zoe should name him”.  “Ok” said Elizabeth and Zoe, “how about Sam?” said Elizabeth. “Yeah, that’s a good name,” said Zoe. “We have to go home now darlings and my handsome son, it’s getting late. “Wait, Sam can’t walk!” said Elizabeth.  “He can ride on my back,” said Elizabeth’s mum.  So they all went home and lived happily ever after. Until one day Sam wandered off... 

The End.